Deceptive Practices
Well, I'm back. Just another bit of nonsense, I'm afraid. Thanks to my lovely friend, Docdeb, for being my beta reader. She edited beautifully and offered many helpful suggestions to improve on my...
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Hooray! She's back with another story, and this one is promising to be a delight...Nick speechless, Gene getting the best of Jarrod at billiards, Silas muttering to himself.... More please!
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OK, I am hooked. Why isn't Nick glad to see them..Great start. PattiVic
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Very interesting start. I'm intrigued by why they are home and why Nick isn't happy to see them. Hurry back.
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Poor Jarrod, his kid brother making him feel old. I too wonder why Nick isn't so happy to see his brothers
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Is Nick the one practicing deceptions? Is this why he is not so happy to see his brothers?
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Yeah a story with Gene. so Nick is not happy to see his brothers...hmm how come?
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Great to see another story from you Queena and what an interesting beginning that leaves the reader wanting more.
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A very hooking story where all the characters act in a rather mysterious way. I am looking for the next chapter. cas
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Ruh-roh! What about his brothers' unexpected presence in the house has gotten Nick so off-kilter ... and how is Heath involved?Can't wait for more!
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Extremely intriguing beginning. I can't see where this short tale will take us.Hurry back Queena !!!
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Loving it already, Queena. So Nick's not happy huh -- what's he up to I wonder?
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Great start...you have me well and truly hooked! Nick is obviously put out by his brothers' return as he was unable to disguise it...but what is the reason for his discimfort? Thanks...now I can't...
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Oh I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going! Why is Nick not happy to have his brothers home and what does he need with Silas? Please do hurry back.
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